Tuesday 17 September 2013

Feedback for Business Pitch - 2nd round

Pack U

Much better than last week.
Clearly stated the amount needed to start.
Key selling points, e.g. going to customers' house to help packing - identified and stated clearly.
Improved visuals, better coordination between members.
Still not able to project how much income you can generate.
Overall, much more convincing this time around!

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